Post-Easter Revisions + New Elevator Pitch!

Instead of using ChatGPT for creating peaky elevator pitches, I FIIIINALY came up with a updated one on my own. Booyah!

Ellexis, a sassy Corporal in Irish Army Intelligence soldier and her brother, Nolan - a multi-faceted engineer with Sergeant chevrons - are helping doctors find a treatment for their mother's horrible illness when she is reluctantly put in charge of their fireteam - Orange Phoenix.

Her objective? To follow breadcrumbs of leads hopefully connecting to a pair of evil geniuses in humanity's interstellar colonies.

The hope is it at last ends a years' long conflict that the genius, Sylas - a charismatic, big brain industrialist - and his wife, Irenka, began against many colonies as well as the United Earth Alliance. That is, building and controlling an empire of the ultimate renewable energy, not to mention other, sinister projects.

Or she, and whoever has survived, all fail.

Ooo - scary. :) And nope, still no official title for this.

Disclaimer: this is not final.

Aaand now:

Pages Revised for the week of April 6th: 4.5.

Which Chapter? Chapter 11 has been intriguing. I’ve made quite a few small cuts to it - seeing that page count dwindle. And those cuts ought to make the story have better…. functionality? Just be better, honestly. More of the same steps as the previously: clarify the garble, spit-n-shine the existing narration, and add missing details.

Moreover, I am moving a portion to a different part of this chapter. Will it work out? I think it will, for the characters’ sake.

Percentage number: Its, oh… probably 73.930.

No new picture of this that may spoil it. Sooo, intead, here are two images that server as inspiration:

Windows 10 image, featuring Abu Daubi.

An HVAC boiler contraption. I saw this at a seasonal job once. Makes me think of a nuclear reactor…