Pre-Easter week Northday

SeewhatIdidthere?

I’ll give you the answer next week.

Pages Revised for this Week: 14-16.

Which Chapter? Chapter 10 - half of it. Less of this is a total, ground-up rewrite and more of it is something I am calling the Three C’s: Cut, Clarify, and Consistency. I feel its working much better than in Draft 1.

Percentage number: Seventeeeyyyyyy Percent.

From last week at Panera Bread.